BR 1:06 Stories of Pirates

"Now I know where the treasure is, I'm going to get it for my self" (P. 43)

 Did you watch "The Pirates of Caribbean"?? I love this movie. I watched all story. I'm a man. Man's is trying adventure in a life. I want to see and get treasure. I couldn’t that I become be a pirate. Because I don’t like sea. Do you like sea?? I like mountain more than sea. Mountain is beautiful. For example, grow many trees, the song of birds, clear river and so on. And in winter at mountain, we will be able to skiing. Let’s go to skiing in this winter with me.
I don’t like sea another reason that sea’s accident so dangerous and dreadful. If our ships are sunk, we couldn’t escape from the ship. Because in this case, scene of all around the sea and we couldn’t swim for a long time. The entire customer will be dying. I want to not die in the sea.                                    

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Punter Russell. (2003). stories of Pirates. London, U.K: Usborne